Persuasive Writing

In Te Muanga we have been learning to write a persuasive writing, I did well on writing a lot of reasons  and always doing my plan first but i could of done a better job by putting more examples in there so the reader understands my writing. Here is my writing i hope you like it and i hope i persuade you on my writing.
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Chromebooks Are Amazing

In my opinion I believe that chromebooks are good because it keeps me focused and it might keep you focused as well and you can learn how to type fast.

You can also do a lot of writing.

Fistly chromebooks are also amazing because you can type up information faster instead of looking in a long book.You can type up anything you want ( You really need to get this now ).

Secondly on chromebooks you have a spelling tool that can help you with your Spelling mistakes, here is an example. When you have a spelling mistake on your chromebook you just click the tool button and then If you have a book and you have a spelling mistake you have to rub it out and then sometimes your book gets dirty (Chromebooks don’t do that ).

Thirdly you can show your teacher some evidence and she will not tell you off because you have some evidence to show Him or Her.You can even do your work at home if you’re not up to date.

Finally in our class we have 98 percent that we all need chromebooks in the world and we feel that chromebooks help our learning.Did people even know that chromebooks exist because they are not buying them?

This is why I believe that Chromebooks are the best for us to use and for you to use as well.

My Reflection

In Te Maunga I have been learning to do a reflection. I did well on saying what i am doing good at and what am i going to do next time. I could of done a better job next time by saying more information and by doing more detail. Here is my reflection

I was Learning to do my fractions with my teacher,  so that i can be better at  fractions and to help teach others.The skills i learn i can help other people.I found it hard because it was a bit to hard to understand and to say sometimes. I did well by helping the people that was beside me and they could help me too.I did well I worked hard on this learning by staying on my task and sitting in one spot and being a person that keeps on track of their work not there friends.Now I need to find another workshop so i can learn more and  more and so i can get better.

My Writing Goals

In Te Maunga we have been working on our goal's. I think i could of done a better effort by writing more so that the reader that wants to know what i am learning understands. I think i did well by showing what my goal is and why i am that level. The most i'm focusing on is sentence structure. These are my goal's.

	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea	Structure	Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R4	R4	R2	R4	R4	R4	R4
	I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.	I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly.	I can write a lot of simple everyday words that I already know.	I use a variety of words and phrases to add detail and I choose words to make people want to read my writing.	My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity. (Personal Voice)	I have all the structure and one part may be developed. I use appropriate language features.	I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	I Know that i am on 4 because i challenge myself on hard words like goosebumps,busting,pedaled and by using the right contraction.	I think I am a 4 because I have been using commas, full stops,.? capital letters .	I am a r2 because I am not using compound words	I am a r4 because  I used similes and metaphors like i am a bursting sun to put more detail in my writing.	I am a r4 because i have lot’s of ideas like i was getting goosebumps,my face was like a bursting sun.	I am r4 because I use paragraphs in my writings.	I am a r4 because i use clear pronouns and i am starting to use complexity.
What next? What are your next learning steps?	By challenging myself  with harder words and by doing my spelling every night.	I will start to put in       ?   !   (   )      ‘	Include detail by using longer sentences so that the readers understand.	I am going to put in more metaphors and picture  for the reader's mind.	I need to make sure my ideas show complexity.	I will put more paragraphs and sentences into my writing.	I need to start sequencing my idear correctly in paragraphs.

Tryathlon

Paihia School had a Tryathlon and Te Maunga wrote a recount about the tryathlon. What i liked about my writing is that i used metaphors to describe my writing. Next time i think i could do better by writing more words and more metaphors.
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Paihia School Tryathlon

First of all last week Paihia school had a tryathlon , in paihia,Miss williams had a talk to us about where we had to go and where you’re  not allowed to go . So we walked down to the beach,I was getting nervous. We were at the beach and I was getting goosebumps.

Next it was our turn,Miss williams said ready set go,there we were in the water splashing the salty water everywhere . Then we started to run,three girls went past me so I sprinted past those three girls .I ran and ran.

After that I squeezed my shoes on and I jumped on the bike as quickly as i could and pedaled as fast as i could. Lilli-Rose went past me,it was my second lap, Lilli-rose went passed the finish line, so did I.

In the end My face was like a sun that was bursting,my mum gave me water. I was so happy and was proud of myself , I feel like collapsing tower.

Beach Ed

In Te Maunga we made a slide about beach ed. The part that I liked that on our slide is the part that says the funnest part. I think we could do better next time by saying more facts but it was fun making the slides. Here is our slide. From Tayla and me Payton

Get New Zealand Writing

I have been learning to right a metaphor about me. I think i did well with writing a metaphor about me, also I think i could do better next time by Using good metaphors. I had a fun time doing metaphors about me.
E.g

Payton is a cookie that is unbreakable  

Payton is a playground that makes kids happy

Here is two photos

Dlo-Maths

Te Ngahere and Te Maunga have put some of our learning on a powtoon, screencastify or thing link to show what they have been learning this week. I think I did well by writing a lot of information and I think I could do better next time by saying more about maths.Here is my powtoon.