Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Get New Zealand Writing

I have been learning to right a metaphor about me. I think i did well with writing a metaphor about me, also I think i could do better next time by Using good metaphors. I had a fun time doing metaphors about me.
E.g

Payton is a cookie that is unbreakable  
Payton is a playground that makes kids happy
Here is two photos


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 5, 2017 at 12:47 PM

    Kia ora payton, great job with your metaphor, I liked the way you said '' Payton is a cookie that is UNBREAKABLE!'' What did you mean with UNBREAKABLE? Does it mean you are strong?
    From Tia :)

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    1. AnonymousApril 5, 2017 at 12:49 PM

      It means that i am strong and helpful thank you for comenting me.bye
      From payton

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  2. AnonymousMay 25, 2017 at 10:11 AM

    kiaora payton. that is some awesome work. maybe next time you could think of some better metaphors.what dose unbreakable mean like you cant brake.From Franky

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  3. AnonymousAugust 10, 2017 at 9:43 AM

    Hi Payton It’s Brodi. I really like how you said that you are an unbreakable cookie. I also like the picture of a cookie it looks so awesome. I also like the the picture that is on the left it is very colorful. How long did it take you to color it?

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