My Writing Goals

In Te Maunga we have been working on our goal's. I think i could of done a better effort by writing more so that the reader that wants to know what i am learning understands. I think i did well by showing what my goal is and why i am that level. The most i'm focusing on is sentence structure. These are my goal's.

	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea	Structure	Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R4	R4	R2	R4	R4	R4	R4
	I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.	I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly.	I can write a lot of simple everyday words that I already know.	I use a variety of words and phrases to add detail and I choose words to make people want to read my writing.	My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity. (Personal Voice)	I have all the structure and one part may be developed. I use appropriate language features.	I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	I Know that i am on 4 because i challenge myself on hard words like goosebumps,busting,pedaled and by using the right contraction.	I think I am a 4 because I have been using commas, full stops,.? capital letters .	I am a r2 because I am not using compound words	I am a r4 because  I used similes and metaphors like i am a bursting sun to put more detail in my writing.	I am a r4 because i have lot’s of ideas like i was getting goosebumps,my face was like a bursting sun.	I am r4 because I use paragraphs in my writings.	I am a r4 because i use clear pronouns and i am starting to use complexity.
What next? What are your next learning steps?	By challenging myself  with harder words and by doing my spelling every night.	I will start to put in       ?   !   (   )      ‘	Include detail by using longer sentences so that the readers understand.	I am going to put in more metaphors and picture  for the reader's mind.	I need to make sure my ideas show complexity.	I will put more paragraphs and sentences into my writing.	I need to start sequencing my idear correctly in paragraphs.