In Te Ngahere we have been learning to write a poem about ourselves using metaphors.I think I did well by using descriptive words to describe myself best in my poem. I think I could do better by adding more detail to my poem about myself. The hard thing was trying to describe myself as something. At first I did not have any ideas but then it started to pop up in my brain. This is my first draft.
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ReplyDeleteIt’s me Missy, I really enjoyed watching your visual pepeha that you made on powtoon. I think it is really good and that you put a lot of effort into it. I enjoyed learning with everyone as well, but my favourite part of all, is that I got to find out who other people are and where their ancestors came from. My thoughts on your visual pepeha, is that it is really good, and that you should keep up the hard work.
Your best friend Missy